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Simon Berry's avatar

Scary because it's something which could actually happen.

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Shona J's avatar

The element of fear & excitement, with mystery feels very real. !

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Shona J's avatar

It’s very nicely written .. & quite exciting to read .. really making the reader feel they’re there in your story.. with the characters ! You sure Transported me Into your story and made me feel a part of it ! You can be a Novel 📚 writer ✍️ & This feels like a chapter in the book 📖.

I think it could make a beautiful story honestly; I really liked reading it …

And the characters, scenes, storyline & description are all very vivid ! Can make a lovely story I think

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